Just posted a new segment over at Uprising, Coffee Shop. Sorry that it has taken me so long to write, but the first few attempts were . . . boring. One of the things that I’m trying to do with this story is to simply cut out the parts that people can easily figure out on their own. If a character needs to get from point A to point B, and one scene ends with him leaving point A and the next starts up with him at point B, then why write about the middle part? The trouble, then, is getting something interesting into every scene, even when the scene could be extremely short.
In other news, I introduce an eye color body modification, which I call iris doping, basically injecting a colored polymer or something into the iris. It would be really cool looking, but also be quite difficult to reverse. If it worked well enough, I’d probably do it.